Here are the individual pages for our game's Tutorial. The text was written by my older brother, Erik Lee. The drawings and handwritten text are by me!
There is a typo in the tut 4 first paragraph "The though was..." should be "The thought was..." yes?
I really dig the whole thing, but after the 2nd "I know that evolution doesn't work that way" the law of diminishing return kicks in. I believe that if you put evolution in quotation marks the reader will get the idea, just introduce it somehow after using the evolution doesn't work like that bit.
reading this made me believe that this adventure is gonna be a fun one for sure!
There is a typo in the tut 4 first paragraph "The though was..." should be "The thought was..." yes?
ReplyDeleteI really dig the whole thing, but after the 2nd "I know that evolution doesn't work that way" the law of diminishing return kicks in. I believe that if you put evolution in quotation marks the reader will get the idea, just introduce it somehow after using the evolution doesn't work like that bit.
reading this made me believe that this adventure is gonna be a fun one for sure!
thank you, my man
ReplyDeleteMy pleasure mi amigo.
ReplyDeletesorry if it seemed harsh with the whole diminishing return thing...